I had a hiatus from reading fantasy for a number of years—in
fact a hiatus from reading for pleasure in general. A few books broke through,
mainly presents from my wife picked up from the supermarket on basis of cover
(and some very good ones at that). I returned to fantasy when I considered
writing my own book and had a two pronged approach. Prong one was to read
fantasy books that were more recent and had garnered respected status: in that
category was Northern Lights, Game of Thrones, Gardens of the Moon & The
Lies of Locke Lamora. Prong two was to revisit some fantasy classics:
Dragonlance, Farseer trilogy and The Belgariad.
Now I chose Belgariad mainly because, along with Terry
Brooks Shannara novels and Donaldson’s Thomas Covenant, they were books that
occupied the fantasy section of the library when I was a kid. Their covers
stuck in my mind and I’d never got around to reading them and felt a need to
balance the modern styles of Martin and Erikson (by ‘modern’ read ‘dark’) with
something a little more innocent and easy going.
The Belgariad’s five books were compulsive reading and I
thoroughly enjoyed going through them. However, when I was getting towards the
middle of book three it did occur to me that the plot was somewhat linear. It
read like a tour guide for the fantasy world he was describing. The characters
were fun and their dialogue witty, and if I took anything from those books it
was the importance of having banter and believable dialogue between the
characters.
Now I’m currently writing the fifth of six books in my Prism
series (which would have been the first half of volume three had the publisher
not chose to splice each volume in twain) and I was reflecting on how clichés
sneak into what I write. I don’t have a huge issue with this, after all it’s
what you do with the clichés that matter, and fantasy isn’t unique in that way.
But when I was thinking my mind drifted back to the Belgeriad, which was hugely
popular but seemed quite laden with fantasy stereotype.
David Eddings was a scholar and teacher of English
Literature and he proposed that all fantasy novels had ten essential
ingredients, which he followed in his various series from the Belgeriad
onwards. I decided to run my fantasy novel, Darkness Rising through the Eddings
rules to see how it fared. Eddings said that fantasy novels required...
1. A Theological
arena
Well, yes, I do have one of those. I’ve two neighbouring
nations with opposing views on the same deity, I’ve got old gods and young gods
and a few demon dukes chucked in for good measure... score 1
2. A Quest
Yes, siree, I have a quest spanning the six books to regain
an ancient artefact which is also coveted by a range of bad guys. Of course,
the artefact is in bits that they have to gain as they go along. Maybe I should
be writing computer games... score 1
3. A magical element
It’s sword and sorcery for a reason. I’ve got elemental
magic focused through gems soldered onto the chests of the mages; wild-magic
which develops randomly in people and utilises ‘mind powers’ and the paradox of
druidic magic... score 1
4. A hero
Just the one? Au contrare, mon ami, I have two. Hunor and
Jem. Given that one is a wild-mage he can count for criteria number 5, and I’ll
keep the happy go lucky, wears his heart on his sleeve, Hunor for the hero. Of
course, he has some secrets and an issue with his past that shapes his
world-view. But that is balanced by a massive sword... score 1
5. A resident wizard
Aww, this is getting crazy now. Yes, I have one, although
he’s not really a Gandalf / Belgarath/ Allanon type. Rather he’s a dapper
obsessive-compulsive Wild-mage from a nation of witch-burners. His mentor is
more akin to the wise-old wizard type, in a sort of Yoda way... score 1
6. A heroine
Indeed I do, and she is the main character for the book. We
meet her first as a child, then a teenager and finally as a woman. It is
Emelia’s search for identity that is the crux of the series... score 1
7. A villain
Well where would be the fun if I didn’t have a decent bad
guy. There’s quite a few in the whole series, but there’s one that’s the big
baddy. He’s not some almighty nebulous presence like Sauron or Lord Foul,
rather he’s an undead sorcerer called Vildor who is Master of the Ghasts,
themselves lords of the vampyrs. He’s exquisitely evil, with a good dose of
charm and wit, and we really see his character develop by book three... score 1
8. A group of companions
Oh my God, I really have written a fantasy by numbers!
Huzzah, I have companions, nay a veritable Fellowship. Roll call by book two
(due out soon...) is thief, wild-mage, wild-mage, monk, druid, tracker, knight.
For added fun the druid and the knight are woman, which creates wonderful
frission as they journey across the aforementioned land of witch-burners... score
1
9. A group of ladies attached to the companions
No! No, no and thrice, no. Given that almost half the group
are of the farer sex this one wouldn’t work for me. And we don’t have any spare
characters, out for the ride because the man they love has chosen to seek a
legendary blade and they’re bored hanging around the palace... score 0
10. Kings, Queens and
Emperors to rule
And a return to form at the last hurdle... huzzah!! The
setting of Prism is replete with nations, with a veritable hotch-potch of
monarchies, theocracies, oligarchies, democracies and tribal societies. All
post-Empire too! It’s like the History Channel dropped a litre of acid and
cavorted like Bilbo’s love-child.... score 1
So I’ve made 9/10. On the Eddings scale I must be near perfect
for my generic fantasy novel. Proud? Absolutely. I have no problem with fantasy
clichés or stereotypes... it’s how we turn them on their head and screw with
them that matters. George RR Martin’s gritty Game of Thrones scores 6, I
reckon, and Erikson’s Garden of the Moon scores 6 also, although on different
ones. So even the new wave tug the forelock to the master of linear fantasy,
David Eddings.
Put your favourite fantasy through it and see how it fares.
More on clichés and classic fantasy influences next time.